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PostSubject: pen and ink (originals)   Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:50 pm

post your original poems, haikus, short stories, qoutes or anything under the realm of literature...originals only!! tnx!!!

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:44 am

<<*free flow mode* -->>biskan anu lang sa subong..impromptu veveh.. Wink >>


WAKE UP.

bang on tha head
she has to wake up
bang on tha head
she already has seen this kind of set-up.

no rhymes please
it's seems like elementary
no rhymes please
dont wanna seem like some sonnet kind of poetry.

he smiles at her
she grins back
wonder when it all started
now what are they both smiling at?

thoughtful conversations, mischievous hints
just bein friendly and oh so casual
but until when?
would this even lead to a scandal?

stop stop stop
this aint any chick group lyric.
wake up, lil gurl
he's committed.

as they usually say:
"he's still hers,
unless he's all yours."
but whoever said that love is about owning?..

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:39 am

ari hu really really old work.. I wrote this upon her death sang HS pa kami... HS demeanor so bear with me.. ahahah

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“Tribute to Rhea Leinor”

The things left unspoken

For the hearts that are broken

Judge not what you see

But only by what you feel

Memories of a friend

Are kept in my heart till the end

The source of joy and laughter

Now lies there, forever

Trials for a lost classmate

We never knew such fate

Her life is uneasy

But she was such so carefree

The honor she left of me being a friend

Will be remembered till my end

To her I give my thanks and gratitude

Even with her such attitude

But hey! This is her life

We only see her strife

She has a lot of ambitions

But never thought she never finished her mission

Can’t believe this could be happening

To her in such a tragic thing

We too are puzzled with our own fate

Never knew our time and date

We’ll see each other when we get there

But then we should too, here

Till our fate has closed the door

We will meet again Rhea Leinor

Rhea Leinor “Fugee” Japsay Fajutrao
February 26, 1984 – November 2, 1999
CPUDHS SSC-NEWTON BATCH 2000
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:43 am

cheessyy HS demeanor poetry.. mga nakita ko sa baul ko ah.. one of the works Munding used to post sa Sneeze kag Undertone nga akon ubra.. ahahah

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Fifteen Past Three

Fifteen past three
I stare on an empty room
I wait in vain for company
As the dark sky gloomed

A cup of coffee by my side
My guitar as my guide
I lament by my window
Staring as the days go by

Fifteen past three
I walked the streets alone
An empty street so it seemed
I wandered from dusk till dawn

The night sky seemed to be so cruel
As it engulfs me whole
The demons grinned at me
As my soul turns from white to foul

Fifteen past three
Slowly I lay to rest
I scamper towards my tiny corner
With a black heart beating in my chest

Confined my soul to the coffin
I float my misery to dust
As angels mourn my worthless being
Immaculate grace turns to rust
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:24 am

untitled I

description: brown out ni sang time nga ni

11:57 p.m. …. pitch black…
the moon’s pale light shines outside my window, no light…
the silhouette of our neighbor’s roof creates an illusion of a palace surrounded by gypsies singing, belly dancing…
the candle…lighted...dim...
trying to maintain the glow of light inside my gloomy room…
thinking of something unusual…
everything seems so absurd…
murmurs and whispered voices of people travel with the wind…
still no sound, no movement, only my fingers quivering to write this down…
a mysterious music can be heard, like the chant of Pope Gregory VI with a musical ensemble…
then silence…
roosters thought the night is over…
still no sound…no light…

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:33 pm

ACHLUOPHOBIA
-as inspired by John Milton's On His Blindness

alone as i sit
when my world turns dark
i felt the ground on my feet
and that made me a wandering bark

cold breeze wrapped me
it brought shivers to my soul
the atmosphere became chilly
and it caused my heart to sore

i felt my body shaking
fear overpowered my being
paranoia began to crept
and i am now catching my breath

clashings, russlings, and chilly sounds
evil laughs, moaning, and agony
pain, greif, and loss
foul smell, and bitterness

my other senses are working
my sense of hearing became kin
i felt the need of using my eye
and from me, that was denied

painful squeek made my ear ache
unstoppable high-pitched sound
i feel so alone
a nervous child on the ground

feeling so hopeless and needing light
i shouted my whole heart out
and suddenly, with a twist of might
i realized,
... i am blind

-chewii0307
02/19/08 3:10 pm Uy
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:59 pm

padali ay:

"dasiga..panumdum..dasiga...ano isulat mo..lapit na lang ang oras...dasiga...ano isulat mo?

ang dugo gasaka sa utok...madalum nga pag panumdum...

wala may nadumduman...wala may guin sulat."

-igitboy nov. 7, 2008 4:56 pm

bwahahahhahhhhahaha

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:16 am

When I'm With You (Collapse)

When I'm with you
silence touches my lips
I could not break into a song
I could not hear my heart beat
neither can I see the sky
nor feel the earth move
My body would be stiff
and cold blood rushes in.

You wouldn't understand
why my stares are dry
locked at your beautiful eyes
wishing that seeing is believing
and believing is nothing real
for time's a churning waste

Woman, you capsized me
a ship sailing through
the seven seas of might
If I'm the Titanic,
The Behemoth, the virgin, the maiden
you would be the iceberg
that struck the bow
filling me no warmth
slowly sinking, splitting
in half, in shreds, in death.
-onigaiki
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Wed Nov 12, 2008 3:45 pm

ngipon floss

hala,ara naman.
ngaa daw indi mapunggan,
pabay-i lang,
madula man ina.

poh..indi.
indi indi.
indi na guid mapunggan.
gusto na guid ipa guwaon.

ginpasulod,
atras-abante
hinaya lang
hala..nagdugo na.

ari tubig,
hugasi lang.
hay salamat,
napagwa na.

isa pa karound,
pwde pa ayhan?..

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:29 pm

Tula ng Desperada—Sulat para sa kanyang mahal pt1

Handa kong gawin ang lahat para sa’yo.
Ikaw lang iniisip ko. Ikaw ang damdamin ko!
Gusto kong mayakap ka at sabihing mahal kita..
Pero anong magagawa’t wala ka na..
Gusto kita makita o mahawakan man lang,
Humingi ng tawad sa lahat nagawang kulang..
Handa akong gawin ang lahat ng ibig mo..
Gagawin ang lahat, masunod ka lang
Tawagin man ang martir o baliw ng iilan
Wala na akong pakialam
Mahal na mahal kita, bakit mo ako iniwan?
Ako’y nagdudurusa, umiiyak na naman..
Gusto kong kausapin mo ako ngunit ako’y iniiwasan
Hindi mo ba alam na ako’y nahihirapan?
Gusto kong malaman mo na handa akong maghintay
At para sayo, handa rin akong mamatay
At kung saktan ka niya, huwag kang maalala
Andito lang ako para damayan ka
At kung ako’y ayaw mo na, hindi na kita pipilitin pa
Dahil ang tanging hangad ko lang na ika’y lumigaya
Pero iyong tandaan, ako’y nandirito lang
Sa mga anak mo’y handa pa ako maging ninang!
Totoo lahat ng iyan at walang halong biro
Bakit ako manloloko sa taong mahal ko?
Kelan man ay hindi ako nagsinungaling sa’yo
At sa buong pagsasama natin ay hindi kita niloko
Hanggang ngayon ay hindi nagbago ang pagtingin ko sa’yo
Panghabang-panahon ang pagtinging ito
At hangang sa tumanda ako ikaw lang ang nasa puso ko,
Ang puso kong iyong-iyo..
Sana maintindihan mo na mahirap ang ika’y ikalimot
Ika’y mamahalin hanggang sa ako’y maging lumot..
At hanggang sa huling hininga ika’y aabangan
Na kumatok ka sa pintuan upang ako ay balikan
Mahal kita, iniibig ng aking sawing puso
Ang tulang ito ay alay sa’yo
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:39 pm

Beer.



Nagmumumok sa isang tabi

Pilit ikalimot ang nangyari noong isang gabi

Tulala’t hindi makapaniwala sa nangyari

Ibinaling ang sisi sa sarili



Nagmumumok sa isang tabi

Hindi alam ang nagawang mali

Ginawa ang lahat upang ika’y mapanatili

Masaya ka na ba’t ako’y nagdadalamahati?



Nagmumukmok.

Upang makalimot.

Inom nang inom

Hanggang sa mapasubo.



Sa gabing ito’y ako’y may naaalala

Paglisan mo’y nagbigay sakin ng pagdurusa

Ako’y naghahanap ng iyong pagkalinga

Sa boteng ito naghanap ng pag-asa
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Fri Nov 14, 2008 1:02 pm

BOXED
bored and lazy...

here i go again
blotting my pen
i do this for no reason
i just hate the season

summer is back
but in a classroom i am stuck
when will our vacation be?
i want to bask in the sea

i wanted to go out
will she permit me? - i doubt
i am stuck with my paper and pen
writing wordds from now and then...

-chewii
03/18/08 12:03pm
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Fri Nov 14, 2008 6:34 pm

Waterloo

I lost my world when I lost this war
Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.

I lost everything when I lost my love
Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.

I lost myself. I lost my pride.
Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.

I got hurt. I cried.
Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.

Every stab left a deep wound.
A deep wound. An open wound.
Call of Arms would be the last call.
I made the last call.
I lose. I've lost. And I'll always be.
Victory seemed to be lost at sea
Every bullet left a mark,
every cut, throughly bled
Then left nothing to be said

I threw myself in isolation
I made myself an island
I think I died in desperation
Like Napoleon after the Waterloo.
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:16 pm

ikaw, ako, at ang sandaling iyon

naalala ko noon
nung tayo'y nasa sasakyan
hindi inaasahang mangyari
na tayo'y magkatabi
nang biglang..
kamay moh sa kamay koh
ika'y natameme
ako'y natulala
pareho napatingin sa magkabilang dulo
dedma.
dedma.
dedma.
malaking ewan.
(nyahaha)

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:35 pm

E's

I let you go, I set you free
But I'll let you see
That I'm the one for you and you're the one for me. (:
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:35 pm

kapoy

pabalik balik
amu man sa gihapon
asta san-o pa ni?
.
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 16, 2008 2:16 pm

overjoyed
-impromptu

last night was my first
excited
thrilled
adrenaline rush
we were wet
literally soaking
wanted to take my clothes off
"wring... wring.. wring..."
'twas all i'm thinking.
we were finally there
the place was too crowded
i was pissed
but everything turned out okay.
i was blank for a moment
then i heard her
that familiar voice
i was sure about it
it's her
no one else but her.
i got excited
again - thrilled
no longer pissed
but i know i pretty am excited
i rushed towards her direction
without noticing the crowd
bumping to and fro
and i finally reached my post
i saw her
her brunette hair
her boyish look
and her striking tattoo!
i was right!
it's dylan
nobody else but dylan
that dylan from that "flip tv show" i'm watching
that dylan from that nu107fm i'm listening
that voice...
that look...
that's her!
i had a good sleep
for last night was my first
and i did not let that opportunity pass me by
i had my picture taken with her
i'm a fan
and i went home with a smile...
i slept soundly
and as i woke up
i looked at my camera again..
i am..
overjoyed.

-chu 2:14pm 11/16/08
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:46 pm

pinalagpat act 1

indi masulat ang iya guina panumdum
kay kagamo kag damo ang indi klaro
indi mabasahan ang iya guinsulat
kay ang tudlo nya nabudlayan mag hulag
indi mainchindihan ang mga letra
kay gabalnsuli kag indi palarehos
wala na kwa ang buot silingon
kay ang iya nga guin ubra pinalgpat.

-inigit nov. 16, 2008 9:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:10 am

" I never Really Knew "

I never really knew how this work
without getting hurt...

I just wanna make you happy,
and if case you're wondering,
got no reasons to make you happy.

Its pathetic how you'd dodge
my missiles and rockets of so-called love;
you hate it, really hate that much
that much, that many, up above.

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Mon Nov 17, 2008 10:17 pm

untitled

I never thought that this would be so sad
I never thought that this would be too bad
I never know because I love you so
And I didn’t notice that everything has changed

So I wrote this letter to say what I feel
I can tell you how much I really care
So I can tell you how much I need you
So I can say that I am missing you so. . .

I didn’t think that this is confusing
I didn’t think that this is depressing
I never knew because I love you so
These are changes I wanted you to know

I wrote this letter to say what I feel
So I can tell you how much I truly care
So I can tell you how much I miss you
So I can say that I am missing you so
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:22 am

When I'm with You

When I'm with you
silence touches my lips
I could not break into a song
I could not hear my heart beat
neither can I see the sky
nor feel the earth move
My body would be stiff
and cold blood rushes in.

You wouldn't understand
why my stares are dry
locked at your beautiful eyes
wishing that seeing is believing
and believing is nothing real
for time's a churning waste

Woman, you capsized me
a ship sailing through
the seven seas of might
If I'm the Titanic,
The Behemoth, the virgin, the maiden
you would be the iceberg
that struck the bow
filling me no warmth
slowly sinking, splitting
in half, in shreds, in death.
-onigaiki
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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Wed Nov 19, 2008 11:21 am

dirty...dust...smoke...ash...cobwebs...

i sniffed...

i sneezed...

-igitboy

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Thu Nov 20, 2008 11:49 pm

*pulawanay

tik tak tik tak

there goes the clock

the number pushes me to sleep

but the keys are keeping me awake

just taking chances

this is my time

savoring every press

enjoying every word

only the dim light of the computer monitor sympathizes with me

everyone is covered by night

they were all lulled by the lamp

and their tired eyes had given up

a'last!

this is how happiness tastes like

it has the softness of the moon and the sweetness of the stars

it is freedom

it is about taking your time

it is about typing this post without somebody scolding you to go because he'll be using the computer.

it is about me being awake, and my brother who is fast asleep.

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PostSubject: Re: pen and ink (originals)   Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:11 pm

pangalipay, diin ka na bala?

si inday wala hilig
magpaduding kada biyernes.
as a matter of fact
wala guid siya hilig
sa kung anu man ang mga paduding paduding nga ina.

ang indi niya kun kis-a maintyendihan
kung ngaa hilig
sang kalabanan ang mag
sulat sang mga panulaton
nga kasubu-an na lang pirme ang unod.

budlay guid bala mangalipay?

(amu ni ang reaksyon sang naghagad kay inday na mag "hang-out" since biyernes na naman.)

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PostSubject: pen and ink (originals)   Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:25 pm

white lie?...

boom boom i can still feel it

have i done the right thing

i don't think its worth a bit

to compromise, a lame upbringing

this will just pass

i will never do it again

just like missing a Sunday's mass

i really do apologize, amen!...


mml mml mml mml
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