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bata batuta Moderator
Posts : 1325 Join date : 2008-10-02 Age : 38 Location : playground
| Subject: pen and ink (originals) Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:50 pm | |
| post your original poems, haikus, short stories, qoutes or anything under the realm of literature...originals only!! tnx!!! | |
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B Moderator
Posts : 1898 Join date : 2008-10-01 Location : likod lens
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:44 am | |
| <<*free flow mode* -->>biskan anu lang sa subong..impromptu veveh.. >> WAKE UP. bang on tha head she has to wake up bang on tha head she already has seen this kind of set-up. no rhymes please it's seems like elementary no rhymes please dont wanna seem like some sonnet kind of poetry. he smiles at her she grins back wonder when it all started now what are they both smiling at? thoughtful conversations, mischievous hints just bein friendly and oh so casual but until when? would this even lead to a scandal? stop stop stop this aint any chick group lyric. wake up, lil gurl he's committed. as they usually say: "he's still hers, unless he's all yours." but whoever said that love is about owning?.. | |
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VanS3n Tambay
Posts : 1634 Join date : 2008-10-08 Age : 41 Location : La Muy Leal Y Noble Ciudad de Iloilo
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:39 am | |
| ari hu really really old work.. I wrote this upon her death sang HS pa kami... HS demeanor so bear with me.. ahahah
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“Tribute to Rhea Leinor”
The things left unspoken
For the hearts that are broken
Judge not what you see
But only by what you feel
Memories of a friend
Are kept in my heart till the end
The source of joy and laughter
Now lies there, forever
Trials for a lost classmate
We never knew such fate
Her life is uneasy
But she was such so carefree
The honor she left of me being a friend
Will be remembered till my end
To her I give my thanks and gratitude
Even with her such attitude
But hey! This is her life
We only see her strife
She has a lot of ambitions
But never thought she never finished her mission
Can’t believe this could be happening
To her in such a tragic thing
We too are puzzled with our own fate
Never knew our time and date
We’ll see each other when we get there
But then we should too, here
Till our fate has closed the door
We will meet again Rhea Leinor
Rhea Leinor “Fugee” Japsay Fajutrao February 26, 1984 – November 2, 1999 CPUDHS SSC-NEWTON BATCH 2000 | |
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VanS3n Tambay
Posts : 1634 Join date : 2008-10-08 Age : 41 Location : La Muy Leal Y Noble Ciudad de Iloilo
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:43 am | |
| cheessyy HS demeanor poetry.. mga nakita ko sa baul ko ah.. one of the works Munding used to post sa Sneeze kag Undertone nga akon ubra.. ahahah
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Fifteen Past Three
Fifteen past three I stare on an empty room I wait in vain for company As the dark sky gloomed
A cup of coffee by my side My guitar as my guide I lament by my window Staring as the days go by
Fifteen past three I walked the streets alone An empty street so it seemed I wandered from dusk till dawn
The night sky seemed to be so cruel As it engulfs me whole The demons grinned at me As my soul turns from white to foul
Fifteen past three Slowly I lay to rest I scamper towards my tiny corner With a black heart beating in my chest
Confined my soul to the coffin I float my misery to dust As angels mourn my worthless being Immaculate grace turns to rust | |
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bata batuta Moderator
Posts : 1325 Join date : 2008-10-02 Age : 38 Location : playground
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:24 am | |
| untitled I
description: brown out ni sang time nga ni
11:57 p.m. …. pitch black… the moon’s pale light shines outside my window, no light… the silhouette of our neighbor’s roof creates an illusion of a palace surrounded by gypsies singing, belly dancing… the candle…lighted...dim... trying to maintain the glow of light inside my gloomy room… thinking of something unusual… everything seems so absurd… murmurs and whispered voices of people travel with the wind… still no sound, no movement, only my fingers quivering to write this down… a mysterious music can be heard, like the chant of Pope Gregory VI with a musical ensemble… then silence… roosters thought the night is over… still no sound…no light… | |
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chuwi Tambay
Posts : 1729 Join date : 2008-11-01 Age : 35 Location : in the middle..
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:33 pm | |
| ACHLUOPHOBIA -as inspired by John Milton's On His Blindness
alone as i sit when my world turns dark i felt the ground on my feet and that made me a wandering bark
cold breeze wrapped me it brought shivers to my soul the atmosphere became chilly and it caused my heart to sore
i felt my body shaking fear overpowered my being paranoia began to crept and i am now catching my breath
clashings, russlings, and chilly sounds evil laughs, moaning, and agony pain, greif, and loss foul smell, and bitterness
my other senses are working my sense of hearing became kin i felt the need of using my eye and from me, that was denied
painful squeek made my ear ache unstoppable high-pitched sound i feel so alone a nervous child on the ground
feeling so hopeless and needing light i shouted my whole heart out and suddenly, with a twist of might i realized, ... i am blind
-chewii0307 02/19/08 3:10 pm Uy | |
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bata batuta Moderator
Posts : 1325 Join date : 2008-10-02 Age : 38 Location : playground
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:59 pm | |
| padali ay:
"dasiga..panumdum..dasiga...ano isulat mo..lapit na lang ang oras...dasiga...ano isulat mo?
ang dugo gasaka sa utok...madalum nga pag panumdum...
wala may nadumduman...wala may guin sulat."
-igitboy nov. 7, 2008 4:56 pm
bwahahahhahhhhahaha | |
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onigaiki Thread Reader
Posts : 98 Join date : 2008-11-05 Age : 37 Location : nether world
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:16 am | |
| When I'm With You (Collapse)
When I'm with you silence touches my lips I could not break into a song I could not hear my heart beat neither can I see the sky nor feel the earth move My body would be stiff and cold blood rushes in.
You wouldn't understand why my stares are dry locked at your beautiful eyes wishing that seeing is believing and believing is nothing real for time's a churning waste
Woman, you capsized me a ship sailing through the seven seas of might If I'm the Titanic, The Behemoth, the virgin, the maiden you would be the iceberg that struck the bow filling me no warmth slowly sinking, splitting in half, in shreds, in death. -onigaiki | |
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B Moderator
Posts : 1898 Join date : 2008-10-01 Location : likod lens
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Wed Nov 12, 2008 3:45 pm | |
| ngipon floss
hala,ara naman. ngaa daw indi mapunggan, pabay-i lang, madula man ina.
poh..indi. indi indi. indi na guid mapunggan. gusto na guid ipa guwaon.
ginpasulod, atras-abante hinaya lang hala..nagdugo na.
ari tubig, hugasi lang. hay salamat, napagwa na.
isa pa karound, pwde pa ayhan?.. | |
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jhamiefloatie Tambay
Posts : 892 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 33 Location : Inside your imagination
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:29 pm | |
| Tula ng Desperada—Sulat para sa kanyang mahal pt1
Handa kong gawin ang lahat para sa’yo. Ikaw lang iniisip ko. Ikaw ang damdamin ko! Gusto kong mayakap ka at sabihing mahal kita.. Pero anong magagawa’t wala ka na.. Gusto kita makita o mahawakan man lang, Humingi ng tawad sa lahat nagawang kulang.. Handa akong gawin ang lahat ng ibig mo.. Gagawin ang lahat, masunod ka lang Tawagin man ang martir o baliw ng iilan Wala na akong pakialam Mahal na mahal kita, bakit mo ako iniwan? Ako’y nagdudurusa, umiiyak na naman.. Gusto kong kausapin mo ako ngunit ako’y iniiwasan Hindi mo ba alam na ako’y nahihirapan? Gusto kong malaman mo na handa akong maghintay At para sayo, handa rin akong mamatay At kung saktan ka niya, huwag kang maalala Andito lang ako para damayan ka At kung ako’y ayaw mo na, hindi na kita pipilitin pa Dahil ang tanging hangad ko lang na ika’y lumigaya Pero iyong tandaan, ako’y nandirito lang Sa mga anak mo’y handa pa ako maging ninang! Totoo lahat ng iyan at walang halong biro Bakit ako manloloko sa taong mahal ko? Kelan man ay hindi ako nagsinungaling sa’yo At sa buong pagsasama natin ay hindi kita niloko Hanggang ngayon ay hindi nagbago ang pagtingin ko sa’yo Panghabang-panahon ang pagtinging ito At hangang sa tumanda ako ikaw lang ang nasa puso ko, Ang puso kong iyong-iyo.. Sana maintindihan mo na mahirap ang ika’y ikalimot Ika’y mamahalin hanggang sa ako’y maging lumot.. At hanggang sa huling hininga ika’y aabangan Na kumatok ka sa pintuan upang ako ay balikan Mahal kita, iniibig ng aking sawing puso Ang tulang ito ay alay sa’yo | |
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jhamiefloatie Tambay
Posts : 892 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 33 Location : Inside your imagination
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:39 pm | |
| Beer.
Nagmumumok sa isang tabi
Pilit ikalimot ang nangyari noong isang gabi
Tulala’t hindi makapaniwala sa nangyari
Ibinaling ang sisi sa sarili
Nagmumumok sa isang tabi
Hindi alam ang nagawang mali
Ginawa ang lahat upang ika’y mapanatili
Masaya ka na ba’t ako’y nagdadalamahati?
Nagmumukmok.
Upang makalimot.
Inom nang inom
Hanggang sa mapasubo.
Sa gabing ito’y ako’y may naaalala
Paglisan mo’y nagbigay sakin ng pagdurusa
Ako’y naghahanap ng iyong pagkalinga
Sa boteng ito naghanap ng pag-asa | |
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chuwi Tambay
Posts : 1729 Join date : 2008-11-01 Age : 35 Location : in the middle..
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Fri Nov 14, 2008 1:02 pm | |
| BOXED bored and lazy...
here i go again blotting my pen i do this for no reason i just hate the season
summer is back but in a classroom i am stuck when will our vacation be? i want to bask in the sea
i wanted to go out will she permit me? - i doubt i am stuck with my paper and pen writing wordds from now and then...
-chewii 03/18/08 12:03pm | |
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jhamiefloatie Tambay
Posts : 892 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 33 Location : Inside your imagination
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Fri Nov 14, 2008 6:34 pm | |
| Waterloo
I lost my world when I lost this war Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.
I lost everything when I lost my love Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.
I lost myself. I lost my pride. Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.
I got hurt. I cried. Like Napoleon on the Battle of Waterloo.
Every stab left a deep wound. A deep wound. An open wound. Call of Arms would be the last call. I made the last call. I lose. I've lost. And I'll always be. Victory seemed to be lost at sea Every bullet left a mark, every cut, throughly bled Then left nothing to be said
I threw myself in isolation I made myself an island I think I died in desperation Like Napoleon after the Waterloo. | |
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B Moderator
Posts : 1898 Join date : 2008-10-01 Location : likod lens
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:16 pm | |
| ikaw, ako, at ang sandaling iyon
naalala ko noon nung tayo'y nasa sasakyan hindi inaasahang mangyari na tayo'y magkatabi nang biglang.. kamay moh sa kamay koh ika'y natameme ako'y natulala pareho napatingin sa magkabilang dulo dedma. dedma. dedma. malaking ewan. (nyahaha) | |
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jhamiefloatie Tambay
Posts : 892 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 33 Location : Inside your imagination
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:35 pm | |
| E's
I let you go, I set you free But I'll let you see That I'm the one for you and you're the one for me. (: | |
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B Moderator
Posts : 1898 Join date : 2008-10-01 Location : likod lens
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:35 pm | |
| kapoy
pabalik balik amu man sa gihapon asta san-o pa ni? . . . | |
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chuwi Tambay
Posts : 1729 Join date : 2008-11-01 Age : 35 Location : in the middle..
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 16, 2008 2:16 pm | |
| overjoyed -impromptu
last night was my first excited thrilled adrenaline rush we were wet literally soaking wanted to take my clothes off "wring... wring.. wring..." 'twas all i'm thinking. we were finally there the place was too crowded i was pissed but everything turned out okay. i was blank for a moment then i heard her that familiar voice i was sure about it it's her no one else but her. i got excited again - thrilled no longer pissed but i know i pretty am excited i rushed towards her direction without noticing the crowd bumping to and fro and i finally reached my post i saw her her brunette hair her boyish look and her striking tattoo! i was right! it's dylan nobody else but dylan that dylan from that "flip tv show" i'm watching that dylan from that nu107fm i'm listening that voice... that look... that's her! i had a good sleep for last night was my first and i did not let that opportunity pass me by i had my picture taken with her i'm a fan and i went home with a smile... i slept soundly and as i woke up i looked at my camera again.. i am.. overjoyed.
-chu 2:14pm 11/16/08 | |
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bata batuta Moderator
Posts : 1325 Join date : 2008-10-02 Age : 38 Location : playground
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:46 pm | |
| pinalagpat act 1
indi masulat ang iya guina panumdum kay kagamo kag damo ang indi klaro indi mabasahan ang iya guinsulat kay ang tudlo nya nabudlayan mag hulag indi mainchindihan ang mga letra kay gabalnsuli kag indi palarehos wala na kwa ang buot silingon kay ang iya nga guin ubra pinalgpat.
-inigit nov. 16, 2008 9:47 pm | |
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onigaiki Thread Reader
Posts : 98 Join date : 2008-11-05 Age : 37 Location : nether world
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Mon Nov 17, 2008 4:10 am | |
| " I never Really Knew " I never really knew how this work without getting hurt... I just wanna make you happy, and if case you're wondering, got no reasons to make you happy. Its pathetic how you'd dodge my missiles and rockets of so-called love; you hate it, really hate that much that much, that many, up above. (random) | |
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jhamiefloatie Tambay
Posts : 892 Join date : 2008-10-28 Age : 33 Location : Inside your imagination
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Mon Nov 17, 2008 10:17 pm | |
| untitled
I never thought that this would be so sad I never thought that this would be too bad I never know because I love you so And I didn’t notice that everything has changed
So I wrote this letter to say what I feel I can tell you how much I really care So I can tell you how much I need you So I can say that I am missing you so. . .
I didn’t think that this is confusing I didn’t think that this is depressing I never knew because I love you so These are changes I wanted you to know
I wrote this letter to say what I feel So I can tell you how much I truly care So I can tell you how much I miss you So I can say that I am missing you so | |
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onigaiki Thread Reader
Posts : 98 Join date : 2008-11-05 Age : 37 Location : nether world
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:22 am | |
| When I'm with You
When I'm with you silence touches my lips I could not break into a song I could not hear my heart beat neither can I see the sky nor feel the earth move My body would be stiff and cold blood rushes in.
You wouldn't understand why my stares are dry locked at your beautiful eyes wishing that seeing is believing and believing is nothing real for time's a churning waste
Woman, you capsized me a ship sailing through the seven seas of might If I'm the Titanic, The Behemoth, the virgin, the maiden you would be the iceberg that struck the bow filling me no warmth slowly sinking, splitting in half, in shreds, in death. -onigaiki | |
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bata batuta Moderator
Posts : 1325 Join date : 2008-10-02 Age : 38 Location : playground
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Wed Nov 19, 2008 11:21 am | |
| dirty...dust...smoke...ash...cobwebs...
i sniffed...
i sneezed...
-igitboy | |
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chuwi Tambay
Posts : 1729 Join date : 2008-11-01 Age : 35 Location : in the middle..
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Thu Nov 20, 2008 11:49 pm | |
| *pulawanay
tik tak tik tak
there goes the clock
the number pushes me to sleep
but the keys are keeping me awake
just taking chances
this is my time
savoring every press
enjoying every word
only the dim light of the computer monitor sympathizes with me
everyone is covered by night
they were all lulled by the lamp
and their tired eyes had given up
a'last!
this is how happiness tastes like
it has the softness of the moon and the sweetness of the stars
it is freedom
it is about taking your time
it is about typing this post without somebody scolding you to go because he'll be using the computer.
it is about me being awake, and my brother who is fast asleep.
-kuris-kuris 11/20/08 11:49pm | |
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B Moderator
Posts : 1898 Join date : 2008-10-01 Location : likod lens
| Subject: Re: pen and ink (originals) Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:11 pm | |
| pangalipay, diin ka na bala?
si inday wala hilig magpaduding kada biyernes. as a matter of fact wala guid siya hilig sa kung anu man ang mga paduding paduding nga ina.
ang indi niya kun kis-a maintyendihan kung ngaa hilig sang kalabanan ang mag sulat sang mga panulaton nga kasubu-an na lang pirme ang unod.
budlay guid bala mangalipay?
(amu ni ang reaksyon sang naghagad kay inday na mag "hang-out" since biyernes na naman.) | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: pen and ink (originals) Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:25 pm | |
| white lie?... boom boom i can still feel it have i done the right thing i don't think its worth a bit to compromise, a lame upbringing this will just pass i will never do it again just like missing a Sunday's mass i really do apologize, amen!... 21:26[11.23.08]witch |
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